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Monday, February 11th 2008

9:44 PM

we’re not used to it….

Here's another inspired by a series of one line prompts. I keep the ones I like and re-work and re-arrange the rest and throw out a bunch that don't work. This is what I came up with:

we're not used to it....

being animate things

that shine on after we’re gone

like a toppled buddha.


There was a time we thought

mom would live forever because

of her hard work at making people happy

in her vivid and lucid dreams she

attempted to fulfill.


But alas, the house is empty

no longer yielding to her touch,

as faceless fear crept around her circle


when banging doors stirred the dust

from the hourglass, broken, sand

trapped in a shadowed box of iniquity

smelling like old rain,

warm in the sunlight.


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